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“There is a serial killer around”, she fearfully whispered. Switching off the TV, he held her close.
“Don’t worry darling, I’ll always be there with you” he hugged her tightly.
“Where could he be?” she wondered in his arms.
His knife glistened in red, little did she know, she would be next.
55 Fiction, is a form of microfiction that refers to the works of fiction that are either limited to a maximum of fifty-five words or have a requirement of exactly 55 words. The origin of 55 Fiction can be traced to a short story writing contest organized by New Times, an independent alternative weekly in San Luis Obispo, California, in 1987.The idea was proposed by New Times founder and publisher Steve Moss.
OH DAMN!!!! That was unexpected!
ReplyDelete:) Glad you thought so Red!
DeleteTwist in the tale!
ReplyDeleteYeah, actually made me want to write more about it
DeleteA sudden and unexpected twist.
ReplyDeleteI think I have been watching too much of Criminal Minds :)
Deletenice attempt for your first...twists are more often than not very dangerous !!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Karan!
DeleteOhhh that was some twist ...
ReplyDeleteI have also attempted it for the first time :)
Just read them! Yayy, I have such lovely conpany :)
Deletehaaww :O terrifying!
ReplyDeleteSuperb! Makes you yearn for more!!
ReplyDeleteGlad you felt so :)
DeleteYikes!! Now that was chilling!!
ReplyDeleteSuperb! :)
Hehehe, Thanks for stopping by Pixie :)
DeleteThis is so terrifying and uve captured the thrilling suspense with deft. Well done, Seeta:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Vishal :)
DeleteUnexpected twist! Very nice!:)
ReplyDeleteThanks, glad you liked it :)
DeleteAmazing ! Most unexpected twist has made the story so wonderful.
ReplyDeleteThanks Usha! :)
DeleteWell written first attempt!
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteYikes now you've creeped me out.
ReplyDeleteDamn! let me tell you a secret, I was in a rather murderous mood over my maid's antics when I wrote it.... err maybe that can help see the humour in it :P
DeleteOMG!! That's scary! A wow twist in the tale! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Shilpa :)
DeleteGosh! That gave me the creeps *shivers*! Good attempt.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rachna! You know how much your views matter to me :)
DeleteThis reminds me of the movie 'Kaun' :) Very scary fiction, Seeta, but a good one :)
ReplyDeleteOh Yes! :) Thanks Gal!
DeleteNice & scary, especially for a first attempt!
ReplyDeleteThanks Renuka!
DeleteScary Twist !!!
ReplyDelete:) Thanks Veena
DeleteNice one... The image looks scary :)
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Thanks Aditya.. well I tried picking up the least scary pic from out there :P
DeleteSomehow, this Sherlock Holmes Fan knew that he'll be the one! :)
ReplyDeleteGreat one, Seeta:)
hahaha! Do you watch Criminal Minds? That would have made you think so too :)
DeleteThe picture gave me a clue..and I could predict that she was next.
ReplyDelete:) Nice one..
Good thinking Preethi :)
Deletevery nice.
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
DeleteChilling.. and this 55-word fiction could be a wonderful script for a 2 hour thriller.. :-D
ReplyDeleteOh Yes! Which actually reminds me of a movie.."Kaun" the one starring Urmila Matondkar remember?
DeleteWow! This is one form I never ever attempt - doing it well is SO difficult and you did it so seemingly effortlessly.
ReplyDeleteI tried it for the first time.. kinda liked it... Thanks Suresh :)
Deletewow that was unexpected ! Sent chills down my spine!
ReplyDeleteThanks Shilpi :)
DeleteSomebody has made it to "Top Post" ...well done!
ReplyDeleteScary! Brilliant first attempt!
ReplyDeleteThanks Magic :)
DeleteI got an inkling of what was about to unfold. Been reading too many thrillers I think.
ReplyDeleteHahahaha probably :)
DeleteThis is great--not at all like a first effort.
ReplyDeleteThat means a lot to me Indu! Thanks :)
DeleteGood attempt, given this is ur first..... But there is scope for improvement dear :))
ReplyDeleteLike I said its a first attempt, obviously there is a long way ahead for me :)
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